Wednesday, 13 September 2017

Formal Letter

Arabella Tan
Somewhere Ring Road
#12-12
Singapore 123456

13 September 2017

Ms. Lim Lay Hoon
Professor
Singapore Institute of Technology
10 Dover Drive
Singapore 138682

Dear Ms. Lim,

My Strengths and Weaknesses in Communication

My name is Arabella Tan. I am writing this letter to introduce myself and share my communication strengths and weaknesses with you. I graduated from Republic Polytechnic with a Diploma in Industrial and Operations Management in 2016. I resumed my studies this year after a gap year which allowed me to take on various part-time jobs to earn the tuition fees, as well as to explore various industries.

Upon taking up internship at Keppelfels Logistics while pursuing my diploma and accumulating work experiences from different work sectors since younger, I am convinced that communication is essential regardless of profession. I also believe that communication is a life skill that we need in our daily interactions.

Seeing the importance and diversity of communication skills, I personally think that flexibility is a vital component in communication and it is a strength of mine obtained through various encounters. During Secondary school and Polytechnic, I was actively participating in many co-curriculum activities and was nominated by teachers for leadership programmes. Being a leader in school include organising events and attending seminars, requiring communication with the school, students, teachers, sponsors and industrial executives etc. Most of the time I had to converse with different groups of people in the same venue and I would approach each group in a different way. When talking to fellow students would be casual and friendly in order to let them feel at ease while I would be courteous yet engaging with industrial executives so as to give a good first impression and let them feel welcomed. My communication flexibility has allowed me to be able to converse with people of various backgrounds in different situations, which greatly improved my socializing skills and made me better at conveying my thoughts.

However, my activeness in conversations may sometimes become overbearing. As I am constantly trying to convey my thoughts, my assertiveness can be seen as hostility or unwilling to listen and accept other opinions. In discussions, I would usually state my opinions first, and then listen to others in which many times, there would be a competition on who should talk first. If we did not reach consensus, arguments would break out and our efficiency declines.

I learnt that being able to listen actively is also a necessary and vital communication skill, it helps us to understand each other better. During work, most of the job scope includes teamwork and in order for me to be on good terms with my colleagues and improve efficiency, my goal in this module will be learning how to slow down and start listening before trying to speak. I hope that it will become a habit and change it into a strength to boost my confidence while starting to step into my future career.

Yours Sincerely,
Arabella Tan
Student from SIE2016

Sustainable Infrastructure Engineering (Land)

12 comments:

  1. Hi Arabella

    Winfred here, i have read through your letter and have found some mistake. First of all, the subject line is missing. Next, there are some grammatical errors here and there, nothing too major.
    All in all, great job with the letter and keep up the good work.
    Thanks

    Winfred Chong
    Fellow Student

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    1. Thank you Winfred for letting me know that i missed out the subject line! I did not notice until you have said so.

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  2. Hi Arabella,

    Mindy here, great example and elaboration on your strength! Perhaps you may want to share your plan on overcoming your weakness? Enjoy reading, great job! Thank you! :)

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    1. Hello Mindy, i had meant for my last paragraph and goal to be the my solution for overcoming my weakness but perhaps i needed to be clearer. Thank you for the great suggestion!

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  3. Hi Arabella

    Chin Teck here. I have some suggestions for you to improve on your writing. Hope you will find it useful for future writing.

    Intro para:
    -Do not need to include the part on your one year gap before starting uni.
    -You should mention about graduating from poly at the start of the para.

    KeppelFels internship:
    -Can maybe elaborate more on what were your scope of work in the company.
    -Any experiences or situations where you faced difficulties in communications? How did you try to overcome them?

    Probably you might want to consider removing the paragraph on your activeness in conversations- second last paragraph. It would not sound very nice to the reciepient.

    Overall, good job in the writing.

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    1. Hello Chin Teck, thank you for such constructive feedback! As for the elaboration on Keppelfels internship, because the introduction was supposed to be brief and the examples i have given are not based on my internship, hence it was just a brush through. Thank you!

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  4. Hi Arabella, Abby here!
    I really like how your post was written and I feel that it responds well to our given assignment. I feel so as your introduction gave a brief yet deep insight of who you are and the importance of communication to you. I really like the way you gave a brief introduction of what you were going to talk about instead of direcly writing " Strengths" or "Weakness", and also a gave a detailed example to support you point.
    One of the things you could improve on would be to put what you think of importance in your concluding paragraph at the first - in your introduction as I believe that your concluding paragraph should be more of briefly reiterating what was mentioned in your post overall.
    In a nutshell, your post was very well written, good job!

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    1. Thank you for the great suggestions! I always have had a problem with conclusions. I will bear it in mind and improve on my conclusions. Thank you very much!

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  5. Hi Arabella,

    Rachel here. Your letter is well written and interesting. I like how you shared on your strength on building and improving your social skills. Good job! Thank you for sharing! (:

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  6. Hi Arabella,
    Amelia here. You have a great vocabulary and you know how to use them appropriately which made reading this letter all the more descriptive and interesting.

    Keep up the good work!

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